Shadow Unknown Poet Ballad

Without You

I never thought i could feel so alone.
I thought you would always be with me.
Apparently i was wrong,
You left me here alone and tired,
why can’t this ever just end?
What did i do to deserve this?
Sometimes i wonder why i had to fall in love.
Maybe it was for the best,

Or maybe it was for the worst.
Maybe it was this world,
just trying to get a rise out of me.
Maybe i wasn’t  made for love,
all i know is this feeling in my heart,
it makes me feel horrible,
Remembering the day i met you,
remembering the day i fell in love you,
remembering the day i was going to ask you to marry me,
remembering the day you committed suicide.
It all just kills me on the inside,

I don’t know if i can keep going on without you.
Going on without you is a knife in my back.
Everything just makes me feel like im so alone now,
there is no happiness for me without your beautiful heart,
without your amazing smile,
your perfect personality,
there’s just nothing more that i want,
than for you to be here with me right now.
But, this is my life now.
And i know that everything you have been through was too much,
I hope you are finally happy my love.

- ShadowUnknown

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Poet Destroyer A March 27, 2015 at 11:01 PM Shadow, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends @-> LINDA <-@

Jan Allison March 26, 2015 at 12:50 PM simply heartbreaking write Shadow my heart goes out to anyone in this sad situation:-) Hugs jan xx

Skat A March 26, 2015 at 12:17 PM Shadow, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT"

Florin Andronic March 26, 2015 at 10:50 AM Going on without you is a knife in my back. - deep

Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2015 at 9:39 AM - Oh, so heartbreaking .... beautifully written, Shadow! - However, the memories can never die - forever in your heart - hugs // Anne-Lise (7)