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Without You

Just as the flowers wither without the sunshine and rain and with no winter cold the snowman melts away Just as without more wood the fire will surely die and without a cocoon the catterpillar will not become a butterfly Just as the trees loose their leaves when summer turns to fall and ears that turn deaf cannot hear the birds morning song Just as the electric lamp has no light when it is unplugged and without your friendship without your love Alas, I am like all of the above

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Date: 6/20/2017 8:41:00 AM
A very beautiful written poem, yeah it s true that when someone so close to you leaves you or went away, it seems like that your purpose of living has ended, you don t like doimg anything, just cry whole day and remain in the memories however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
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Date: 12/4/2012 4:22:00 PM
Beautiful poetry!! thank you for sharing!!- Edwaard
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 12/5/2012 6:02:00 AM
Thank you Edward.
Date: 11/1/2011 9:26:00 AM
Hey there sis ! What a pleasure to see that you have not lost your touch for the cleaver writes...I enjoyed this very much dear poet sister of mine ! Have a wonderful week Joan ! Much love, james
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Joanmarie Peranteau
Date: 11/4/2011 1:43:00 PM
Merci beaucoupe, dear brother. Reading your writes. WOW so many. What is your style & what would you call mine? Luv Sis
Date: 11/1/2011 6:27:00 AM
Welcome to poetry soup....! I see you are James' sister, we have been poet friends for a while now. Enjoyed reading your work today with my morning coffee.....it warms me to the core!
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Date: 10/7/2011 1:51:00 AM
Never let one person make you less of what you are.... nice poem. Well done. Lee
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