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Without You

The nights are cold here without you Death is a mist of slicing edges The kind when love dies away And I feel the bleeding slice deep within Within my own self pity This feeling, whatever you call it It must have a name But bitter tongues cannot speak of it Without you here, it's just not the same A monster we have all become We now come face to face This will all be over soon This will all soon fade away Together we will be again Before the end of the day Forever is lasting too long But it seems there's no other way If we stand for one another And together face the oncoming days There will be no doubt That love will find a way Written May 24, 2008

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/1/2008 3:41:00 PM
Thanks for ending on a positive note that makes sense. This flows so well, it is lyrical.
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Date: 11/30/2008 1:58:00 AM
Nice poem, longing for love evokes great pain, thanks for your comment...Raul
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Date: 11/28/2008 5:50:00 PM
"Love 'Always' Finds A Way Kristin~And~It Always Shall!"~Another soulful write of yours dear lady~pouring your precious heart upon the pages~A treasure truly it does all seem~For you are so good~So gifted~Which sincerely paints you so very beautiful~If one is to be honest about everything!!!~"You Are Such A Jewel Dear~Never ever doubt that, for you are!!!~And, I am so glad that I met "You!"~"My Love Always To You, John!"~Bye Dear:)
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