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Without U

Like a poem without the poetic touch Like a novel without a story as such... Like a dish deprived of salt,I guess... Such is the state of my distress ! Like a book without a single page... Like a wrestler without an ounce of rage; Like a song bereft of words any... Such is the effect of your absence in me...! Like a boat in water without a rudder; Like a motivated mob without a leader: Like the pen of a poet sans any ink... This is how I suffer & think.... Why was I so careless about U? Not knowing how I would live without U! My heartbeats utter your name quietly... & my eyes burn in your memories brightly... As if my moments spent with you... Descend to my heart like morning dew! The painful absence hurts within... As though I had perpetrated a ghastly sin... Why did I ever doubt U? Not knowing how I would live without U...!

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Date: 3/17/2013 7:10:00 AM
Without the one you love ...... "is like soup without salt":) - well written! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/17/2013 12:40:00 AM
What a poem to read before bed thank you for the read. Good night.
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