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Without This Distance In Between

My lips, lonely for your kisses My skin, longing for your touch My eyes, aching just to see you I fear that I miss you too much My breath should be against you My fingers in your hair My arms should be around you I should not be here, but there My heart should beat against yours Now, that it's yours again My hands, my mouth, my all Are all open to let you in My days want you to fill them My nights spin themselves in dreams Of you and I together Without this distance in between

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/27/2010 11:01:00 AM
and endearing write! Light & Love
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:18:00 AM
I see that you don't have soup mail...So I will tell you...If it rhymes the syllable count per line needs to be even...It can be unrhymed and the syllable count needs to be odd...As even..6,8,10....Odd 3,5,7,9...
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Date: 4/27/2010 3:13:00 AM
It could be classified as Rhyme....Great write that expresses very well the emotion...Welcome to soup ....Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara>>>PS...Soup Mail
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Date: 4/26/2010 7:55:00 PM
LOVELY WRITE, I HAVE ENJOYED THE HINT OF LOVE YOU GOT HERE, IRMA
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