Without Saying I Love You

my train has left but I am waiting for you to come to say good bye



written 26/02/202
1st placement
without saying I love you contest
JCB Brul sponsored
17 syllables
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Gauthier Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 6:16 AM
delightful ~ congrats on your top win, Krish
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 20, 2021 at 6:22 AM
Thanks Line. much appreciate your visit! Kind regards! BW Krish
Jayasankar Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 1:27 AM
This is lovely Krishji... Congrats on your first placement... God bless.. ~ Ani
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 6, 2021 at 2:08 AM
Thanks Ani! Good wishes to you!
Y. Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 6:29 AM
Hi Krish, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 5, 2021 at 4:05 AM
Thanks Alexis! Thanks for your kind words!
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 3:15 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Krish ... so sad to say goodbye - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Radhakrishna Avatar
March 4, 2021 at 3:34 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise. indeed. sometime a good bye can mean so much!:)
Wolf Avatar
February 27, 2021 at 6:16 PM
Ha, ha! What an image I'm getting of this one in my mind. Good one, Krish. :) gw
Radhakrishna Avatar
February 28, 2021 at 1:35 AM
Gershon I know who somebody who did that! She came and they went together!!:)
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