Without Elves

ship was almost bare'
Christmas Nineteen-Eighty-Three
Newport News dry dock
time was three A.M
there was a flooding somewhere
inport  fire party
disaster no more
duty section back to sleep
no elves were needed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 5:28 PM
Nice one and title too.
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