Without a Title

dewy sunset floats

with bright orchids and garlands---

veiling mother's knoll




Haiku no titles, theme NATURE
For Mick Talbot's Contest   4/17/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:12 PM
Who needs a title when the content is awesome! Beautiful imagery and a superb end line, Nette. Congratulations on a very deserved win. Hugs // paul
Gentry Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 11:10 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Pett Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Back with congratulations on your well deserved win. :))
Sinha-Roy Avatar
April 18, 2018 at 3:17 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your well deserved win.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 11:46 AM
Back with congrats :) xomo!
Rodrigues Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Congrats!!
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 9:10 AM
Pretty hauki nette, Congrats:-) hugs jan xx
Carber Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:59 AM
This is really very sweet-- and in 3 lines you capture not only love of nature's infinite beauty, but of the profound love you had for your mom--well done!
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 8:04 AM
- Congratulations on your 3rd place in the contest, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 7:57 AM
Back with congrats on your bronze medal win, nette.
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations Nette. Tom.
Vaso Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 10:58 PM
I simply loved this!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:55 PM
Lovely! :)
Pandit Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:21 PM
Wonderful imagery in your haiku..orchids and garlands..best for a win, nette.
Pett Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:12 PM
Lovely Haiku nette, a joy to read, good luck in contest. :))
Rodrigues Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 3:01 PM
Pretty, Nette!
Gauthier Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:48 PM
Lovely, nette
Andresen Avatar
April 16, 2018 at 2:19 PM
- Love the last line, Nette - Well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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