Jenish Somadas Poet Sijo

Without a Parting Kiss

Running with the van of death, till her legs couldn't defeat the wheels
Lonely road in awful calmth, not a shoulder for cry and share
Covid hit her love went far, without even a parting kiss.

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John Castellenas September 7, 2020 at 1:26 AM A powerful write. You made the reader feel and understand the sadness in the words. A amazing poem. Jenish Somadas September 7, 2020 at 9:53 PM Thank you John for your kind words..

Aditi Mishra May 27, 2020 at 2:13 PM This is such a sad emotional write Jenish. You do wonders with words especially in Sijo form. Jenish Somadas May 28, 2020 at 1:06 AM Thank you Aditi for your wonderful support..

Shirley Hawkins May 25, 2020 at 3:09 AM To leave this world without a kiss Dear God, There is something very wrong with this ... Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 3:13 AM Yes.. True..

Shirley Hawkins May 24, 2020 at 10:25 PM So sad, to lose a loved one without being able to kiss or speak words of love to them in their last few minutes of their life on Earth. Beautifully expressed Jenish ... Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 12:22 AM Thank you Shirley..Did we poets, ever imagined a world like this?Oh human, into the grave you go without even a parting kiss..

Gershon Wolf May 24, 2020 at 11:21 AM A searing image you've created, Jenish. May these times eventually be forgotten. Cheers, Gershon Jenish Somadas May 25, 2020 at 12:19 AM May it be forgotten soon..Thank you Gershon..