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Without a Goobye

Chatting together Like friends, and then you are gone Without a goodbye

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 8/9/2013 7:44:00 PM

Cool haiku. Why should there be a goodbye? There should only be helllllooo! hellooo! I don't know why you say goodbye I say helllo ! ;) Haha Just kidding Cool cool haiku. Always, Laura

Jonas L. Rozario

Date: 10/14/2012 10:12:00 AM

Oh this is sad...a great haiku. Very nicely written...enjoyed it a lot!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/26/2012 5:02:00 PM

Rebecca, a very deep haiku,,, sometimes a goodbye is not needed, thank you for sharing, xox~PD