Anna Sabrina Tate Poet Rhyme

Without

Without a whisper you said goodbye 
Without a movement I felt you die. 
Without a thought my tears began
And without struggle down my cheeks they ran. 

Without life and without breath
Without reason you had gone to death. 
Without your guidance in life to cope
I'm without reason and without hope. 

Without direction to show me the way ahead
Without my mums love filled my future with dread. 
Without insight to what now lies beyond
Without my mother's love that once belonged. 
   By Anna Sabrina Tate  23/02/2016.

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Poet Destroyer A February 12, 2016 at 10:48 AM Thanks for the reply

Poet Destroyer A January 23, 2016 at 8:20 PM Anna, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ Anna Sabrina Tate February 11, 2016 at 12:22 PM Thankyou I look forward to this experience in others poetry

Skat A January 23, 2016 at 2:57 PM Anna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT Anna Sabrina Tate January 23, 2016 at 3:17 PM Hi thanks for the comment. I'm just starting out with poetry so need all the help I can get lol. Xx