Within the Fog

The moonlight shimmered on the winding road
A chilled wind rolled to battle and smite
Slicing through the fog and croaking toads
There was a blood curdling scream heard that night

The fog's hand choked the throat of graves,
as it passed the stone bridge grasping its iron gate
Tall stones stood like marbled guards that wait
These sentries for death moonlight illuminates

A caretaker's eyes welded to shadows moving slow
A scream, a wolf's howl pierced to intervene,
the dark wings that flew by a dead willow
Frightened the caretaker, his imagination he gleans

No one knows of the caretaker's fate,
or of the shadowed wings he had seen
At each full moon near halloween,
a scream and wolf's call is heard pure and clean

They say ghosts had risen in the fog in flight,
by the stone bride with its iron gate
There was a blood crudling scream heard that night


contest Ghost Stories
10/23/14
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 3:59 PM
Congratulations on your win Frederic
Callus Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 10:15 AM
Congratulations on your podium finish, Frederic! Very much deserved. Enjoyed this chilly, scary poem. // paul
Yvonne Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 9:58 AM
What an excellent poem! Congratulations on your well deserved win.
Allison Avatar
November 5, 2014 at 7:49 AM
dropping back with my congrats Frederic:-) Hugs jan xx
Deschler Avatar
November 4, 2014 at 9:45 PM
I really enjoyed reading this very atmospheric and terrifying ghost story! I loved the rhyming and smooth flow of the words, also.... Congrats on your win, Frederic!
Kiser Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:27 PM
A good, scary...edge of the seat, poem.
Parker Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:32 PM
thank you M.L. for the kindness
Andresen Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 11:20 AM
- A truly chilling ghost story, Frederic - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Parker Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 6:31 PM
Thank you Anne for your kindness
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 11:00 AM
ooh Frederic this chilled me to the bone when I read it. Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs jan xx
Parker Avatar
October 23, 2014 at 11:09 AM
thank you Jan for reading and the kindness extended
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