Within the Fog

Within the fog
there is nothing to see but sea
nothing but wind and wave
nothing but dawn which gave
vision to melody

Within the fog
there is nothing to hear but sea
nothing but ocean sound
nothing but gulls outbound
illusion of harmony

Within the fog
there is nothing to touch but sea
nothing but salt and sand
nothing but waves wet hand
collision with divinity

Within the fog.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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June 10, 2013 at 7:40 PM
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May 25, 2013 at 11:08 AM
Luann, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
Guzzi Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 12:49 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 1:25 AM
Many congratulations on your win Luann, well done xx
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May 20, 2013 at 8:47 PM
L, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda
Kendrick Avatar
May 20, 2013 at 12:20 PM
I could hear the sounds from your descriptions..Congrats on your win..Sara
Posey Avatar
May 18, 2013 at 7:46 PM
Nice imagery here... Welcome to PSoup. You should develop a following with your verses.... Jake
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