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Within the Fog

Within the fog there is nothing to see but sea nothing but wind and wave nothing but dawn which gave vision to melody Within the fog there is nothing to hear but sea nothing but ocean sound nothing but gulls outbound illusion of harmony Within the fog there is nothing to touch but sea nothing but salt and sand nothing but waves wet hand collision with divinity Within the fog.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 7:40:00 PM
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Date: 5/25/2013 11:08:00 AM
Luann, your poem is very enjoyable :-) A nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/21/2013 12:49:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2013 1:25:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Luann, well done xx
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Date: 5/20/2013 8:47:00 PM
L, Congratulations!! A nice winning poem... Linda
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Date: 5/20/2013 12:20:00 PM
I could hear the sounds from your descriptions..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Date: 5/18/2013 7:46:00 PM
Nice imagery here... Welcome to PSoup. You should develop a following with your verses.... Jake
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