Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Within the Bramble

When the sun kisses 
the morning skies
Soft fluffy clouds murmur 
like floating tides 
Dew drops coat leaves 
with faint sighs
Gently caressing my 
petals open wide
Showing off where 
the brambles lies
The summer can no 
longer hide
Natures beauty with 
a small surprise

7/5/2020
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John Fleming August 30, 2020 at 9:10 AM I thought I had already commented on this one...but, no. Glad I checked! It certainly is a little gem, Miss Chiri -- love it! Belated congratulations on a well deserved win. As always...with lots of affection. :) john Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:20 AM Ahhh even if you had John I would have enjoyed another comment from you!:) thank you!:)

Suzanne Delaney July 25, 2020 at 7:06 PM A lovely image of nature, Congrats on your win. SuZ Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:19 AM Thank you I appreciate your comment!:)

Aditi Mishra July 23, 2020 at 4:32 AM This is so gorgeous Brenda. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and love :) Brenda Chiri September 3, 2020 at 5:19 AM Thank you so much!:)

Connie Marcum Wong July 13, 2020 at 12:52 PM Short but divine Brenda! I loved it! Congratulations on your podium win! Blessings xxoo Brenda Chiri July 13, 2020 at 2:48 PM Thank you So much Connie!;)

William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 7:37 PM Breathlessly well said, Brenda, my compliments for your endeavors truly and deserving win -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Brenda Chiri July 12, 2020 at 8:09 PM William thank you my dear friend do glad you enjoyed it!;)

John Watt July 12, 2020 at 7:33 PM Brenda, a delightful poem of the flower in the brambles, I love your last 4 lines especially. Congratulations on your win ~ John Brenda Chiri July 12, 2020 at 8:08 PM Thank you John! Always enjoy when you visit!;)

JC Brul July 12, 2020 at 1:12 AM Simply beautiful. Congratulations on your win! Brenda Chiri July 12, 2020 at 8:07 PM Thank you so much!;)

Sam Kauffman July 11, 2020 at 11:53 PM Just lovely Brenda. So many beautiful images "when the sun kisses the morning skies." Congratulations on your winning placement! Warmest wishes Brenda Chiri July 12, 2020 at 8:07 PM Thanks so much Sam I appreciate your visit and comment!;)

Winged Warrior July 11, 2020 at 6:47 PM Awesome write dear sis...congrats!!...the Unicorns are happy lol...bro bro :o) Brenda Chiri July 11, 2020 at 6:50 PM Ah bro bro I’m so happy you and the unicorns liked it!;) thank you so much!;)

Mystic Rose Rose July 6, 2020 at 11:35 AM Summer prefers to accent your beauties rather then hide them. You can never hide talent when it comes to poetry, shine on girl, shine on ! Brenda Chiri July 6, 2020 at 11:50 AM Pixie you are too king! Thank you so much!;)

Gershon Wolf July 5, 2020 at 3:53 PM Ooh, Brenda. I will be very, very careful not to 'get stuck!' ~ No Thrill in those Thorns Brenda Chiri July 5, 2020 at 10:57 PM Ah but they might hold an allure hahaha! Thank you Gershon I have miss your brilliant sense of humor!;)