Within His Eyes

Within his eyes,
A sea of brown,
Within his eyes,
She knew she'd drown.
Within his eyes,
There was no pain,
Within his eyes,
She would remain.
Within his eyes
There was fire,
Within his eyes,
She saw desire.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Sands Avatar
November 2, 2016 at 7:37 PM
Very Nice Kay! I also hope you are feeling better :)
Roberts Avatar
November 3, 2016 at 3:12 AM
Thank you Heidi and yes, I'm recuperating well, still some residual pain. However I am getting around a lot easier and without my crutches. I hope all is well with you :)
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