Within Elysium Dreams

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Within Elysium dreams shining bright,
a shining song of love our hearts do play,
peace and joy are found in the velvet night.

In starlight glades our hearts do shine love-light,
as hand in hand we walk love's golden way,
within Elysium dreams shining bright.

Before the moonlight our hearts now take flight,
as on golden wings we fly from the day,
peace and joy are found in the velvet night.

Together in love we do share the night,
from moonlight and stars we shall never stray,
within Elysium dreams shining bright.

In Elysium dreams you are love's sight,
but you must go by the dawn of the day,
peace and joy are found in the velvet night.

Love's joy can be found within dreams delight,
passion can sing love shall never delay.
Within Elysium dreams shining bright,
peace and joy are found in the velvet night.

23/12/2018

(Within The Depths Of Sapphire Eyes Series)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 1/17/2019 6:29:00 PM
I would like to thank all those who drop by to view this piece. Your visits help a poet to keep singing. have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 1/1/2019 4:53:00 AM
You have tackled this form extremely well, Mike, and the romantic content is a delight to read. Love, passion peace and joy...what else does one need! Best regards, my friend. // paul
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/4/2019 4:03:00 PM
Hi Paul, thank you for dropping by and the comment on my Villanelle, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. Within Elysium dreams love can always be found. I do so love to let the heart sing my friend. Have a wonderful weekend. Your friend always....Mike.
Date: 12/25/2018 11:31:00 PM
The stars and the moon are always romantic, especially for lovers Mike. This is lovely! I hope you enjoyed Christmas! xxoo : )
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 12/31/2018 10:27:00 AM
Hi Connie, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked the piece. I had a wonderful Christmas, I hope it was the same with you. The heart is still singing love's joys. It shall always do so. Have a very happy New Year Connie. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 12/24/2018 9:11:00 AM
A shining love song does sing from hearts of perfect bliss, my dear friend. Your stardusted words fly me through moonlight on wondrous golden wings of imagery and emotions. Elysium dreams glow with passionate love and joy within the form of your beautiful villanelle, Mike. Just gorgeous! Warmest wishes always my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 12/31/2018 10:11:00 AM
Hi Susan, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this write, it is much appreciated. I am so glad you liked this piece. The heart still on love's journey, singing its songs onto the page. I do so love those Elysium dreams. Have a very happy New Year Susan. Hugs....Mike. XX
Date: 12/23/2018 9:35:00 AM
An excellent write Mike. I enjoyed the rhythm of your verses and the happy tones. A lovely poem.
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Date: 12/31/2018 9:57:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you for dropping by and the comment on this piece, it is much appreciated. I am glad you liked the piece. Love's journey ever goes on and within dreams it can sing so wonderful. I do love the journey. Have a Happy new Year. Have a wonderful Monday. Your driens always....Mike.
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