Within

A distant star,
your hopes are pinned,
so far away.

Your trust, misplaced,
in deep spaced faith;
embrace - within.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
March 16, 2016 at 7:49 AM
Than-Bauk written in style..Congrats on your winner..Sara
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March 15, 2016 at 5:52 PM
David, Congrats on your win in "Marugu MO's contest." Wuv ~LINDA~
Dietrich Avatar
March 13, 2016 at 7:20 PM
I really like yours, David. Congrats on the winners' list.
Raven Avatar
March 11, 2016 at 8:37 AM
Hi David, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
Dahlusion Avatar
February 14, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Spiritually sound, and beautifully presented. Bravo Poet! ––))
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