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Writhing thoughts tangle and swirl
Inside my head, darkly
Teasing and taunting making me long
Hoping for light so sweet
Inside my head I'm already dead
Nothing but light can atone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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March 25, 2016 at 11:32 PM
M Kari, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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March 28, 2016 at 12:08 AM
Thank you. I have one last week of college and then no more classes until fall so yes, I do think I will return to writing more poetry ^_^
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