Within

Get out of my head
You with the silky skin
With your soft smile
With those eyes
That make me die
A thousand times 
Inside 

Instead 
Let the right one in
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
July 31, 2010 at 7:12 PM
sounds like thoughts that confuse the mind immensely. btw, sorry for the late comments, i havn't been on in a long while, almost a month(: i hope you're great David!! ~Always&Forever Lynette
A   Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 5:02 AM
David, it makes perfect sense as if good and evil are hideing your light..Women wise. Have a nice one,..LeeAnn
Delacroix Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 10:11 PM
:) And so it shall. There is always going to be other silky skins, more of those eyes. It is what is in the heart that is the hardest to get out. I wonder if it ever gets forgotten.
Bloomsfield Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:13 PM
I enjoyed reading this sweet poem,you made me smile that soft smile ,lol! Lovely: ) Celene!
Arteaga Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:07 PM
well you got to let them find the door now don't you? it's hard especially when in mind, nice poem
A  Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:01 PM
NICE ONE, ENJOYED THE ENDING- SKAT
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