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Within

Throbbing spirits spawn,
Projecting human colors,
Through reality.

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Andrea Dietrich

March 11, 2010 at 12:58 PM

Nice visual. Write on, Robert!

Jeralynn Clark

March 11, 2010 at 6:36 AM

We are responsible for that which is within us! Nice write Robert! J

Richard Pickett

March 10, 2010 at 8:06 AM

Nice write as always, good flow here Robert...It's good to be back....Your Friend Taz...

Mary Meade Stephenson

March 8, 2010 at 9:06 AM

A superbly written senryu Robert...deep and thought provoking! Great job! Thanks so much for sharing! God Bless~Mary

Daver Austin

March 7, 2010 at 5:28 AM

Dear Robert. Are you a believer in auras? Maybe this fine senryu is not about auras, but I get dinged that way about it. At any rate you are kind of spooky. Me too. BIG LOVE, daver

Skat A

March 6, 2010 at 5:29 PM

Most enjoyed, I find your poem intresting with a little deepness in it...

Linda Witt-King

March 5, 2010 at 11:11 PM

That's deep. Really deep. Quite profound actually. I do believe you've captured the essence of it...how about you check your soup mail while I look up the difference between a Senryu poem and a Haiku poem.

Audrey Haick

March 5, 2010 at 7:15 AM

..Wonderful Senryu, Robert! As usual, you inspire so many of us with your poetry! Thanks for reading and leaving encouraging words for me! Peace, Audrey