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Within Within the stillness, faint echoes of sounds can be heard Late night hours, grappling with what is real and the absurd Hearing indistinguishable voices, conversations overheard Perhaps just a past memory, lost subconsciously interred Within the darkness, where all your senses come alive Clashing with all your fears, deepest emotions revive Blackness surrounding you, a light thumping arrives Awakening your heart, kindling your strength to survive Within the amber light, first light begins to appear Twilight upon you, your dreamscape interferes All memories of your dreams suddenly disappear Eyes adjusting to the light, mind becoming clear Within that moment, both clarity and confusion begin Your thoughts and emotions emerge to your chagrin Those questions and queries making your mind spin All of these take you on your solemn journey within

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Date: 4/6/2024 6:06:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Charlie Baker
Date: 4/7/2024 5:25:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 3/25/2024 2:01:00 AM
A good poem. Well done.
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Charlie Baker
Date: 3/26/2024 7:11:00 AM
Thank you

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