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Lilies look to their bulbs and survive when leaves dry Gaillardia gazes at stems. Preserve moisture. Marigolds focus on node existence to thrive. Vegetations possess this habit of nature. Cacti do not starve because they preserve their food. Flies of deserts conserve their water in chitin. Thus creatures of nature observe her rhythm and mood. To grow in God and flourish man must go within. 13 June 2021 Workshop: Adjectives Deleted Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster

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Date: 7/13/2021 1:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. I love your line, "To grow in God and flourish man must go within." So true. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 7/12/2021 7:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win for this well penned poem
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Date: 7/12/2021 4:40:00 AM
Back with congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 6/14/2021 4:24:00 AM
Really liked your take on contest theme. Last line superb. All the best
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Date: 6/13/2021 11:28:00 AM
you sure did well without using adjectives. I think the judge should like this one!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/13/2021 12:46:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 6/13/2021 9:40:00 AM
you looked deep within to write this lovely poem. good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 6/13/2021 10:25:00 AM
Thank you very much.