With the Eye As a Target

A hunting riffle
And a yell…
On the blue shade of silence
Scratches:
Flashes light in the horizon
The quietness…

Worms spin the fortune wheel;
Interfere with mermaids’ songs-
Pierced by the arrow
The sunset is blocked
Between the eyelashes.




(translated by Laura Bogdan )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Iordache Avatar
November 13, 2013 at 10:52 AM
Thank you very much for your comment. I am happy that my poems have resonance.
Peppellini Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 3:11 PM
I love how you shape words to tell a story, You have me on the edge of my seat reveling in the strength and courage of your convictions.
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