With Tears

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Written on December 29, 2023

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Silent tears hold the loudest pain - author unknown. Just when I think no one will know, There comes a soft and gentle flow, Silently sighing o’er the light, Stirring my heart’s kindness to glow. Reflected on moments so bright, Painting my soul with dreams I write, Vows broken never can reveal, Spoken by those who know my plight. Wonders, breathless, are quite real, Capture my dreams with their appeal, Breaking through the murkiest fears, Proving love is stronger than steel. Blessing with love that lasts thru years, Graceful and sure, darkness soon clears, Even though I weep soundless tears. Yes, how I weep those soundless tears!

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 12/29/2023 3:31:00 PM

your poetic talents shine through on this one, Gina. Soundless tears--wow, that's a terrific title and theme to this gem of a poem. I'm in awe of you beautifully and consistently you write. Have a great evening, Sara

Silent One

Date: 12/29/2023 6:20:00 AM

This is really emotive, I can feel the pain and angst in your words.. Your poem flows so well and the rhymes are very good... Nicely done dear..

Charles Messina

Date: 12/29/2023 5:44:00 AM

So emotional, Gina. "Love is stronger than steel" Love this! PS: See my reply on my blog...Love, Charlie