Paul Callus Poet Cinquain

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With Love

Helpless.
           Time had run out.
          Unable to conceive
adoption brought relief, and love
                 to share.

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           Contest: Cinquain
       Sponsor: Sara Kendrick

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Shereeen Esther J June 14, 2015 at 3:21 PM Nice !!!! Paul Callus June 14, 2015 at 4:49 PM Thank you Shereen! All the best. // paul

Sara Kendrick June 12, 2015 at 3:39 PM Congrats on your on your winning work ..Thank you for your participation in my contest.....Sara Paul Callus June 13, 2015 at 4:44 PM Thank you Sara; it was a pleasure participating:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen June 12, 2015 at 5:56 AM - Congratulations, Paul !! - Lovely poem - I wish you a great weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 1:01 PM Thank you Anne Lise! May your weekend be lovely, too:) Hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2015 at 11:55 PM hey, you, Congratulations again. Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:40 PM Thank you Andrea...can hear you loud and clear...out and over:) Have a nice weekend. // paul

Connie Marcum Wong June 11, 2015 at 8:19 PM Forgot to Congratulate you on your win! Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:34 PM :)))

Connie Marcum Wong June 11, 2015 at 8:18 PM Adoption can be the most wonderful gift in the world, for the adoptive parent and the birth parent. I loved this little gem Paul! Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:38 PM I agree with you Connie. So pleased that you like this one. Hope you're keeping well. Hugs // paul

Skat A June 11, 2015 at 3:50 PM Paul, Congratulations........ SKAT Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:33 PM Thank you Skat:)

Poet Destroyer A June 11, 2015 at 2:00 PM Paul, Congratulations on your win. LOVE LINDA Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:22 PM Thank you Linda. Have a lovely weekend:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison June 11, 2015 at 10:03 AM what a wonderful positive poem - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:20 PM Thank you Jan. Quite a few people that I know in our village have adopted children, mostly from abroad. They integrate quickly in the community. Hugs // paul

Ravi Sathasivam June 11, 2015 at 2:12 AM Excellent. Beautifully painted. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:09 PM Thank you Ravi. Your excellent comments are appreciated. // paul

Kim Merryman June 10, 2015 at 9:44 PM Wonderful cinquain, Paul! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:07 PM Thank you Kim! Pleased that you enjoyed. All the best. // paul

Judy Konos June 10, 2015 at 9:07 PM Therrrrr he goes again! Congratulations Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:02 PM Thank you Judy! Always lovely to have you stopping by:) // paul

Sandra Haight June 10, 2015 at 7:00 PM Paul, your words of hope reinforce the blessing that so many share when they provide life and love for unfortunate lives. Congratulations on your fine win! Sandra Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 12:06 PM Adoption could mean make or break for many children. At least they are given the chance of experiencing family life. Thank you for your lovely feedback, Sandra. // paul

Joseph May June 10, 2015 at 6:26 PM Congrats on a fine win Paul Paul Callus June 12, 2015 at 11:56 AM Thank you Joseph; enjoyed your winning entry, too. // paul

Peter Dome June 10, 2015 at 2:11 AM This is great Paul, say's so much with few words. hope you win. this is a winner for me. take care bet wishes. Pete. 7. Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 5:17 PM Thank you for the high rating and the faith you show in it, Peter. All the best. // paul

Afolabi Muideen June 9, 2015 at 11:50 PM Beautiful paint Paul, small worlds with a great message, excellent write.........A.M. Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 5:14 PM Many thanks Afolabi. It is a message of love; may it spread to those in need of it. // paul

Afolabi Muideen June 9, 2015 at 11:47 PM Beautiful paint Paul, small worlds with a great message, excellent write.........A.M.

Nette Onclaud June 9, 2015 at 11:18 PM quilled with compassion and great imagery, paul... tugging at the heartstrings!.. huggs Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 4:46 PM I'm pleased that you were touched, Nette! Thank you for reading and for the positive feedback. hugs // paul

Lindsay Laurie June 9, 2015 at 8:50 PM G'day Paul... out of heartache sometimes the seed of love and inspiration arises. You gave something nice to share Paul - Lindsay Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 4:49 PM Your comments are indeed encouraging, Lindsay. Your visit is appreciated. All the best. // paul

Cecilia Macfarlane June 9, 2015 at 7:00 PM Touching and beautiful Tim. Hugs Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 4:34 PM It's alright Cecilia...grrrrr is a good way to show emotion:) Thank you for liking! hugs // paul Cecilia Macfarlane June 9, 2015 at 7:00 PM Grrrr.....sorry Paul

Andrea Dietrich June 9, 2015 at 6:02 PM this is a sweet one, Paul! Paul Callus June 10, 2015 at 4:21 PM Thank you Andrea; glad you like! // paul