With Him

Dedicated to my friend whose husband went to heaven. When I asked her how she was, she said, “I’ll be okay, as soon as I can stop crying.” WITH HIM since i’m on the subject of storms; women of enormous strength brave undertow, ride its wave chin up hence weep until the tears dry — might be awhile love need not explain the everlast’ coat of arms in his smile runs from sea to her knees. . . the purest hands. palms commune with God who sees her life without him. with HIM walks 7/23/2019 Ninette

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Ann Foster

Date: 8/3/2019 10:24:00 AM

Sweet, pure... penned with a quilled flower. Ann

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/3/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thanks so much, Ann!

Ralph Sergi

Date: 7/28/2019 9:26:00 AM

Hi Kim: When you reach an age in later life and someone you know was close to you has died, ultimately, He will be there for you. Great Penning!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2019 6:51:00 PM

Thank you, Ralph!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2019 7:38:00 AM

- A lovely writing, Kim ... great shape ... in your three verses :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2019 8:26:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/24/2019 7:22:00 AM

I love this poem, and the note that tells us who inspired it and what she said. "women of enormous strength brave undertow, ride its wave chin up hence" Beautiful write. I am sure she appreciates it.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/24/2019 7:24:00 AM

Thank you, Caren!

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/23/2019 4:58:00 PM

Very nice Kim. Blessings to all :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/23/2019 8:35:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi!