With Broken Bones

Your making me walk on broken bones,
I’m breathing through punctured lungs
put me to the tight rope time to cross,
off you go, this is the grunge,
of my life, will it pay off?
Take out rent on my heart
and hide yourself up in the rafters
start the decay then depart.
I can taste bitterness on my tongue 
feel it rot within my teeth
you’re making me kiss with bloody lips,
the ghosts are waiting just beneath.
Your making me walk on broken bones,
I’m living like a ghost dies,
Put me up to the pulpit,
I will recite the preacher’s lies.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Taylor Avatar
November 3, 2010 at 5:54 PM
New Favorite! I am almost speechless. The imagery is flawless so are the metaphors. I just love your writing now. I hope you have many more of this quality. Amazing!
Valles Avatar
October 11, 2010 at 3:15 PM
Like the visuals and the last 2 lines flawless
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