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For the monoku Contest of PD
and for the Bring it :) Your Best Monoku Poetry Contest

With Beauty

summer sky  m e l t i n g   
                           as a butterfly alights 
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                    g      with beauty

butterflymonoku

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Manmath Dalei

April 14, 2016 at 1:54 PM

Congrats on ur win....with love

Joseph May

April 14, 2016 at 12:05 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea

Sneha Rv

April 14, 2016 at 11:44 AM

Oh; this is beautiful!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :) :)

Paul Callus

April 14, 2016 at 11:01 AM

It's a pleasure reading this beautiful monoku again, Andrea. Congratulations on a very deserved top placed win!! ~ regards // paul

Charlie Smith

April 14, 2016 at 11:00 AM

Beautiful win Andrea, congratulations...

Bl Devnath

April 14, 2016 at 7:35 AM

Beautiful monoku and beautiful win. Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

April 13, 2016 at 8:32 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Carrie Richards

April 13, 2016 at 8:06 PM

And so is your monoku......dripping with beauty !!! Congrats to you, Andrea!

Monterey Sirak

January 31, 2016 at 7:29 AM

Bravo! Love the images in action!

Skat A

January 26, 2016 at 11:20 AM

Andrea, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

Curtis Johnson

January 25, 2016 at 3:46 PM

I know that this is not an easy task. Great 'One Liner' work Andrea. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

January 25, 2016 at 9:41 AM

Congratulations on your top spot!

Balveen Cheema

January 25, 2016 at 6:55 AM

Congrats on your well deserved first placement,Andrea!

James Inman

January 25, 2016 at 5:02 AM

Excellent monoku, Andrea. Perfect 5-7-5 haiku form and subject as well.

David Mohn

January 24, 2016 at 9:16 PM

this is so tactile and beautiful...congrats Andrea :)

Poet Destroyer A

January 24, 2016 at 8:40 PM

Andrea, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA

Susan Gentry

January 14, 2016 at 1:05 AM

Excellent monoku! Good luck in contest.

Paul Callus

January 12, 2016 at 11:47 AM

Melting and dripping with beauty...and we can bathe in it! I love it! // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

January 12, 2016 at 7:42 AM

What an awesome sunset you must have beheld. Nicely captured.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

January 11, 2016 at 6:11 PM

Of course the title and its innards delightfully penned. I can see everything of it in my mind's eye.

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 11, 2016 at 1:47 PM

- Yes ! ....Beauty, Andrea - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

January 11, 2016 at 9:59 AM

Good one..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Never seen a butterfly drip though..LOL..Thanks for stopping by..My cat loves birds, chipmonks, and squirrel..She will bring me some sometimes and place it at my back door that is if she has had enough..Maybe she wants that part cooked..Sara