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With Beauty

Summer sky melting   as a butterfly alights  d r i p p i n g with beauty

For the monoku Contest of PD
and now for the Bring it :) Your Best Monoku (used in my past Monoku/one liner contest) Poetry Contest

butterflymonoku

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Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/14/2016 1:54:00 PM

Congrats on ur win....with love

Joseph May

Date: 4/14/2016 12:05:00 PM

Congrats on a great win Andrea

Sneha Rv

Date: 4/14/2016 11:44:00 AM

Oh; this is beautiful!! Congratulations on your lovely win!! :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 4/14/2016 11:01:00 AM

It's a pleasure reading this beautiful monoku again, Andrea. Congratulations on a very deserved top placed win!! ~ regards // paul

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/14/2016 11:00:00 AM

Beautiful win Andrea, congratulations...

Bl Devnath

Date: 4/14/2016 7:35:00 AM

Beautiful monoku and beautiful win. Congrats my lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2016 8:32:00 PM

Andrea, Congratulations on your Amazing, One line win. Stop by my blog "On The Hunt" and enjoy my happy dance or not!!! LOL... Luv ~LINDA~"

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/13/2016 8:06:00 PM

And so is your monoku......dripping with beauty !!! Congrats to you, Andrea!

Monterey Sirak

Date: 1/31/2016 7:29:00 AM

Bravo! Love the images in action!

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 11:20:00 AM

Andrea, Congrats on your monoku win. LOVE ** SKAT **

Curtis Johnson

Date: 1/25/2016 3:46:00 PM

I know that this is not an easy task. Great 'One Liner' work Andrea. Congrats.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/25/2016 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your top spot!

Balveen Cheema

Date: 1/25/2016 6:55:00 AM

Congrats on your well deserved first placement,Andrea!

James Inman

Date: 1/25/2016 5:02:00 AM

Excellent monoku, Andrea. Perfect 5-7-5 haiku form and subject as well.

David Mohn

Date: 1/24/2016 9:16:00 PM

this is so tactile and beautiful...congrats Andrea :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/24/2016 8:40:00 PM

Andrea, thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "FINALLY, WE WON" if you'd like. Take Care. LINDA

Susan Gentry

Date: 1/14/2016 1:05:00 AM

Excellent monoku! Good luck in contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/12/2016 11:47:00 AM

Melting and dripping with beauty...and we can bathe in it! I love it! // paul

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 1/12/2016 7:42:00 AM

What an awesome sunset you must have beheld. Nicely captured.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 1/11/2016 6:11:00 PM

Of course the title and its innards delightfully penned. I can see everything of it in my mind's eye.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/11/2016 1:47:00 PM

- Yes ! ....Beauty, Andrea - Luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2016 9:59:00 AM

Good one..Reads like a winner if for a contest..Never seen a butterfly drip though..LOL..Thanks for stopping by..My cat loves birds, chipmonks, and squirrel..She will bring me some sometimes and place it at my back door that is if she has had enough..Maybe she wants that part cooked..Sara