Line Gauthier Poet Acrostic

With Bated Breath

Weathered memories
I dream of you as always
Thoughts that linger onwards
Hover in the stillness of the night

Behind sullen shadows
Across silent clashing waves
Throbs of a heart beating
Echo relentless in my head
Distanced from this realm

Beached dreams of you and me
Reminder of our time cut short
Every moment thereafter
A throbbing aching longing
To reunite two souls in love
Heaven awaits with bated breath



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on August 22, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL 8 – ACROSTIC (WITH BATED BREATH) sponsored by EDWARD IBEH  -  RANKED 3RD

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Connie Marcum Wong September 9, 2019 at 11:10 AM I love this romantic poem Line. You know how to write a great acrostic! Congratulations on your deserving podium win!: ) xxoo

Regina Mcintosh September 7, 2019 at 10:08 PM Lovely poem and I enjoyed it so much. Congratulations and blessings. Line Gauthier September 7, 2019 at 10:18 PM Thank you, Regina. Much appreciated.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 7, 2019 at 3:00 PM - A lovely poem, Line ... especially love the last line :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Line Gauthier September 7, 2019 at 10:18 PM Thank you so much, Sunshine.

Edward Ibeh September 7, 2019 at 12:16 PM Beautiful poetry, Line:-) Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations on your win in my contest! Line Gauthier September 7, 2019 at 10:18 PM Thanks, Edward. Most appreciated.

Caren Krutsinger August 23, 2019 at 2:18 AM "Beached dreams of you and me Reminder of our time cut short" - so poignant, and real. Line Gauthier August 23, 2019 at 5:38 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.

Panagiota Romios August 22, 2019 at 11:28 PM A fab acrostic, may Gid reward your efforts and who you are, with a well deserved win! Xo Panagiota Line Gauthier August 22, 2019 at 11:30 PM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Panagiota.