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With Bated Breath

Weathered memories I dream of you as always Thoughts that linger onwards Hover in the stillness of the night Behind sullen shadows Across silent clashing waves Throbs of a heart beating Echo relentless in my head Distanced from this realm Beached dreams of you and me Reminder of our time cut short Every moment thereafter A throbbing aching longing To reunite two souls in love Heaven awaits with bated breath AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Submitted on August 22, 2019 for contest PICK A TITLE, VOL 8 – ACROSTIC (WITH BATED BREATH) sponsored by EDWARD IBEH - RANKED 3RD

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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/9/2019 11:10:00 AM
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I love this romantic poem Line. You know how to write a great acrostic! Congratulations on your deserving podium win!: ) xxoo
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Regina Mcintosh
Date: 9/7/2019 10:08:00 PM
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Lovely poem and I enjoyed it so much. Congratulations and blessings.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/7/2019 10:18:00 PM
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Thank you, Regina. Much appreciated.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/7/2019 3:00:00 PM
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- A lovely poem, Line ... especially love the last line :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/7/2019 10:18:00 PM
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Thank you so much, Sunshine.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/7/2019 12:16:00 PM
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Beautiful poetry, Line:-) Thoroughly enjoyed. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/7/2019 10:18:00 PM
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Thanks, Edward. Most appreciated.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/23/2019 2:18:00 AM
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"Beached dreams of you and me Reminder of our time cut short" - so poignant, and real.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/23/2019 5:38:00 AM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Caren.
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 8/22/2019 11:28:00 PM
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A fab acrostic, may Gid reward your efforts and who you are, with a well deserved win! Xo Panagiota
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/22/2019 11:30:00 PM
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Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Panagiota.

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