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I was viewing some shots from outer space of the earth and thought that from some angles that it looked like the old marbles that I once played with years ago...I ran across the song by ABBA and this all came together from that song..Sara
"I have a dream, a song to sing" About an earth seen from up in space Like an Agate marble swirling green How much longer will that be the case When the broad picture viewed be defaced "I have a dream, a song to sing" About an earth that now has many faults People here are fighting death to brothers bring When our leaders to us say what is false But I believe in angels with them I waltz "I have a dream, a song to sing" When I cross that river stream On my way over I'll turn and see An earth that has healed been redeemed As I cross that stream_into my everlasting dream Quote from the song "I Have A Dream" by ABBA Sponsor: Joe Maverick Contest: Occlusion Form English Quintain Written by Sara Kendrick Click on "About This Poem"

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Date: 3/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
Since I am no longer a Premium member my click on is not there for one to view the notes and picture that was there...Sara
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Date: 11/26/2012 6:05:00 PM
Sara, this is so lovely, I touched by the flows and words and felt some peace by reading those, good luck for your contest, I really enjoy my morning by reading your piece of art :) - Hug, Yanny (*I'm going to put this on my fav's poem :D)
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Date: 11/24/2012 10:42:00 PM
What a brilliantly mastered poem my friend! You have done a wondrous job at crafting a perfect English Quintain! I have a hard time with those so I usually don't do them, but you did very well with it! I really enjoyed reading this delightful poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 11/24/2012 5:21:00 PM
Well written in a moving poem, Sara. - Are Abba one of your favorite music? - Good luck in the contest. - Have a nice and restful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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