With An Without You

when i was with you there were lies
when i was with you there were tears 
when i was with you there was your insecurity
when i was with you a razor was my best friend
when i was with you there were abusive blows
when i was with you there was hate and malice just wishing it would end
without you there is darkness
without you life is an infinte abyss
without you there is no light to show me the way
without each other we cant face another day
and so we cant be with or without the other
both of us souless monsters destroying more of each other 
never letting go
both sealed to a never ending cycle till one
or both of us pull the trigger
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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September 14, 2013 at 10:07 AM
Dana, , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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September 12, 2013 at 2:31 PM
Stinging beats of the heart. Writhing madness mixed w/occasional bits of clarity, before the vicious circle starts again. Incredible emotion & fight here. Great job!
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September 12, 2013 at 1:26 PM
Welcome to P-Soup,Dana ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours. - My first greeting to you from Norway / / / Anne-Lise :)
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September 12, 2013 at 1:26 PM
Hello Dana, wow... what an ending! love it ,, thank you for expressing your write and finding this site. -A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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