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Wistful: characterized by melancholy; longing; yearning for something one knows will never have

Wishes are never horses, making beggars be less cheerful Increased interest to the unreachable despite being careful Subjects, condemns and stimulates one to be less grateful The moment shortens the stretched hands and makes nothing wonderful Feelings fiercely negative, make the coveted powerful Unidirectional is the attempt which feels unlawful Loving someone who will never love back, shows life is half full

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 1/9/2019 5:05:00 PM

Hello Fumon, loving someone that does not love back, hurts the other person. Have a nice evening my friend.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/8/2019 10:27:00 AM

A deep and moving acrostic so artfully expressed Funom. A very impressive write! You excel in this form my friend! : )

James Edward Lee Sr.

Date: 12/26/2018 7:11:00 PM

I endeavor to be in awe of your great works... Beautiful verse deep from the soul.... James

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/21/2018 7:33:00 PM

So true, ahhh, we all have so many wishes!!!

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:33:00 AM

Yeah Andrea my wonderful friend... Thank you so much for your comment

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/20/2018 7:35:00 AM

- An excellent poem, Funom :) - I wish you a peaceful and beautiful Christmas :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:24:00 AM

Thank you so much sunshine smile... I have been smiling from your comment

Charles Messina

Date: 12/19/2018 8:43:00 PM

Wonderful Acrostic, Funom. You are a master of this form of poetry my friend. All the best...Charlie

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:20:00 AM

Thank you so much Charles Messina... I really appreciate this

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/19/2018 2:06:00 PM

precious, funom...any plans of publishing a book on acrostic?...huggs

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:18:00 AM

Yes my dear Nette Onclaud and I promise to send a copy to you wherever you are.. Thank you so much my friend...

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/19/2018 12:05:00 AM

Hi Funom, I haven't written any poems in Acrostic, but I am so impressed with yours and the powerful meaning behind Wistful. A beautiful poem Funom, love can hurt if it is not returned in kind, but does and will again cross your path when you least expect it! Best Wishes, Jennifer.

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Jennifer Proxenos...

CayCay Jennings

Date: 12/18/2018 6:19:00 PM

I am impressed with your command of Acrostic, what a long list of 'brain-teasers' you have created. I read a few, and like this one, they are deep and thought provoking. I think you've well written more than anyone else I know. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much CayCay, I accept your poetry hugs...

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 12/18/2018 5:49:00 PM

This acrostic is very meaningful and artfully done... excellent work! ;)

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Rhona McFerran

Gary Bateman

Date: 12/18/2018 5:35:00 PM

Hello Funom!! I must say my old friend, this is a quite wondrous Acrostic in every respect, with seven palpable and powerful messages rendered from your verses spelling "Wistful" as the poem unfolds. I liked this one very much!! A FAVE TOO!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 9:01:00 AM

Thank you my beloved friend. It has been a while and I really miss you and other friends here. Thank you so much for stopping by.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/18/2018 3:28:00 PM

Reaching for the unattainable, especially where love is concerned, could lead to pain and sadness. Indeed, as you well say, life can never be full. This acrostic in monorhyme for is worthy of praise, Funom. // paul

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 8:56:00 AM

Thank you so much Paul, my subsequent acrostics will be in monorhymes from now on.

Silent One

Date: 12/18/2018 2:30:00 PM

Great acrostic.. Welcome back my brother..

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 8:52:00 AM

Thank you bro... I am glad we are both still here

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/18/2018 1:42:00 PM

Wishes are tiny dreams reaching for the unreachable. Sometimes, these wishes come true. My heart rejoices knowing this fact. "Loving someone who will never love back, shows life is half full" This thought truly touches my heart. This is beautiful and emotional, all at the same time. ~ Brandy

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 8:50:00 AM

Yeah Brandy.. Thank you so much for your comment. Merry Christmas.

Eve Roper

Date: 12/18/2018 11:29:00 AM

Funom, not only Acrostic, but also Monorhyme, awesome work. Life is so hard on some people, but if you have faith and the love of God they will have everything even if they have not much.Have a Merry Christmas to you and yours... hugs Eve~`*

Funom Makama
Date: 12/22/2018 8:48:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve, I named my subsequent acrostics as monorhymes to honour your observation.