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Wispy Clouds

Wispy clouds change shape and the earth rotates clouds break apart then regroup a cool breeze signals fall Though the world is in motion, my life stalls no changes in sight today nor tomorrow; if ever?

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/28/2010 5:10:00 PM

This is really cool, like an analogy to life. I am sure many feel this way from time to time. I enjoyed. LUv, Andrea

Lynette Chachere

Date: 9/28/2010 3:40:00 PM

will the clouds tell us when a change arrives?(: ~Always&Forever Lynette

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/25/2010 9:00:00 AM

Hi Doris, to answer your question: I havn't been in the military but worked in many countries in development aid, mainly with the church and government....Gert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/25/2010 7:00:00 AM

Yes, Doris, lovely Kimo and well written! I agree with you and Carolyn, we all hope for changes sometimes!...Have a nice Sunday!...Gerrt

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/25/2010 5:18:00 AM

We are stalled in that same boat to nowhere, Doris. I guess it is up to us to bring about positive changes. I hope you can find the strength; I'm still trying but seem stuck in a rut. Could relate to your lovely kimo, dear. Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 9/24/2010 7:13:00 PM

I've enjoyed your other Kimo Doris. Looks like a cery creative form. Thanks for your comments today, they are important to me. Agape, Moses