Wishing Well

What dreams may come
of wishing wells
four leaf clovers
and stars that fell

Coin drop wishes
Three foot deep
would they come to fruition
If faith could leap?

Yet hope speaks silent
with heartfelt envy
as the dreamer dreams
and casts the penny 

Willing the power of a wish to impart 
a reality by reason of want
those secret yearnings begging in the heart
hoping something beyond sight will respond

I wish I may
I wish I might
Have the wish I wish tonight
by star or well or tunnel dark
by random penny in my shoe
by any corse a wish comes true
I've told this wish to only you

While many without faith may dismiss
I promise I will always believe in this wish
and in the things I am yet to learn
to grant me this wish I soulfully yearn

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/21/2014 9:51:00 PM
This one really set my heart aglow, Sarai. It is so full of sweetness and heartfelt emotion, grown-up and childlike at once, which is a difficult task to attempt. I believe the universe listens, responding to the wish expressed in any sincere, believing way.
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 4/28/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thank you with all sincerity Mark. I haven't been to the Soup much lately, really miss your work and think of you often. I pray you are well and happy and that your writing has brought you to that deeper fulfillment you were seeking not to long ago. Take care dear one. Hugs <3
Date: 4/10/2014 9:17:00 PM
You have such a sweet tender heart, my dearest Sarai I feel in the depth of my soul that your greatest wish will one day come true! Loving hugs, Jack E. XOXOX
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 4/28/2014 2:15:00 AM
Hugs to you my dear sweet friend ALWAYS!
Date: 4/10/2014 10:09:00 AM
Good morning Sarai.
Login to Reply
Date: 4/9/2014 8:42:00 AM
May all your wishes come true. Remember, you are the wish that came true for those fortunate enough to love and be loved by you.
Login to Reply
Virden Avatar
Sarai Virden
Date: 4/28/2014 2:14:00 AM
Hi Richard, haven't been to the Soup in awhile. Thanks for your comment, sorry it's taken me so long to reply. I hope to be out of my funk and back to my old self soon. Hugs
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad