Wishing Well
Sitting on a wishing well
Wish and wish I may
But my feet are getting soggy
and I'm running low on change
I cant keep hanging onto dreams
Im drying out up here
My skins cracked and it falls slowly down
Waiting lightly on the water
Sitting on a wishing well
Something shines below
Sometimes I think Ill dive in
Sometimes I can still pretend
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