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Stella Williams was eight years old, living with her widowed mother- Happily, though a bit lonely, like powder blue skies, sans sunset color. The Williams lived in a rural area, with no child Stella's age, nearby. A farmer in the valley, was the only neighbor, like waves of no reply. Still, school hours were fun for Stella, like rollicking days of summer; When plum sun, waltzed with stars of glitter, often going undercover. Stella, at times, threw coins in their well, to wish for a special friend, Besides the birds and blooms of beauty, and rolling hills of never end. As faint rays forgive after furious storm, distant family came, finally; In fancy days of dinnerplate dahlias, of gold, pink, or maroon vitality. Stella lived in the house of empty rooms, that recollected sunny joys; There the nostalgic past, argued with hopeful future, making no noise. A purple path close to their front door, seemed painted with petunias; In amethyst days of evening sparkle, and sunrises, the hue of peaches. Numerous nightingales sang at hiigh noon, when new neighbors called; In notable, precious moments, not ever forgotten-redolence enthralled! 'String of hearts plants,' trailed love petals, as 'oyster plant,' culled gems. The rich pink, 'quill blooms,' shot daggers, like vexed queens, in diadems. 'Enchanting hostas' charmed summer moon, as 'elephant ears,' harked; Then 'rising sun redbud' trees sang, with dawn on gloss petals, marked. Stella still wandered to the well to wish, some afternoons and evenings, As some yet gaze at mysterious stars, to uncover astrological meanings. Stella was reading in her favorite spot, on a day of hot, persimmon sun; And she looked up and saw a girl her age. A new friendship was begun! Veronica was the daughter of the farmer in the dell, who was divorced; And she was now living with him. Stella was invited to dinner, of course. In time, Stella and her mom got to know, their nearest neighbors, well; For Stella got her wish, when her mother married the farmer in the dell. 'The farmer in the dell. The farmer in the dell. Hi-ho, the derry-o! The farmer in the dell. The farmer takes a wife. The farmer takes a wife. Hi-ho, the derry-o! The farmer takes a wife. The wife takes a child. The wife takes a child. Hi-ho, the derry-o! The wife takes a child.'

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Date: 2/4/2025 1:48:00 AM
Missed your Saturday poem. Excellent as usual. Wonderful couplets and nursery rhymes.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/4/2025 6:34:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed this, Victor. deepest thanks.
Date: 2/2/2025 10:24:00 PM
Your way with painting imagery and storytelling through poetic rhythm and rhyme and also with your eloquent use of adjectives and alliterations and descriptive diction, makes your poems stand out always, i especially loved the lines " 'Enchanting hostas' charmed summer moon, as 'elephant ears,' harked; Then 'rising sun redbud' trees sang, with dawn on gloss petals, marked." Beautiful! And the ending so lyrical! Pleasure always reading you! Sending you light today and always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/3/2025 5:42:00 PM
Thank you for the deep delight of reading your lovely comments, Ink. Your wonderful compliments are very much appreciated. I hope your week is blessed. :)
Date: 2/2/2025 6:36:00 PM
This is so uplifting Evelyn especially when the wishes come true. Love your story line and theme. As always you add your mix of ideas that the reader can appreciate in reading through out the story. I enjoy your clever wit in writing and really appreciate your writing talent. Be blessed Dear Lady.
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Date: 2/1/2025 9:39:00 AM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading your wonderful/fun write. Love your wishing well picture. Kid will love this. Have a blessed day as you write away..................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2025 6:55:00 PM
Thank you for the happy smiles your words bring, Paula. It's great news that kids will love this. I hope your weekend is wonderful. :)
Date: 2/1/2025 1:36:00 AM
- A wishing well - that works :) ... a lovely story, Evelyn :) - You should collect these in a book :) - Have a nice weekend :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2025 6:44:00 PM
I really enjoy writing these stories, and I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this one, Anne-Lise. Thank you for your appreciation, and for the huge compliment. My mother was a storyteller, as was her mother, and other family members, too. Hope your weekend is nice, also. :):):) hugs
Date: 1/31/2025 7:29:00 PM
That’s so lovely Evelyn, and proves that wishes can come true… Beryl
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 2/1/2025 6:35:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your kind words, Beryl. Best wishes. :)

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