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Wishing Well

I am the river
not this bucket of water 
attached to a rope

Copyright © Paul Marc | Year Posted 2020

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June 17, 2022 at 7:07 AM

Beautiful I am old, infirm There are now holes in my bucket. At last Thank you

Malabika Ray Choudhury

June 5, 2022 at 3:48 PM

I am touched with your profound haiku! Really enjoyed the pun! Thanks for visiting my page, and the Fave! BW ~ Mala

May 30, 2022 at 2:09 PM

So true, there's much more to a well. Enjoyed.

Unseeking Seeker

June 20, 2021 at 9:08 PM

Wow!

December 5, 2020 at 8:38 AM

Lovely and creative, PM. Your reasoning 'sets you free'! worthy of a fav. Regards // paul

November 30, 2020 at 4:08 AM

Great thinking went into this one. Enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

October 4, 2020 at 1:36 PM

Great one! Move on in peace :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

September 15, 2020 at 6:24 AM

Profound little ink. Love it. xomo (fave)

September 2, 2020 at 6:56 AM

Contemplate on the Self in order to do away with attachment. Thanks everyone!

August 22, 2020 at 8:34 PM

Congratulations on your win, P.M,. great imagery. Hugs Eve

Andrea Dietrich

August 22, 2020 at 1:35 PM

very clever! Congrats on the win.

August 22, 2020 at 12:27 PM

Congratulations on your winning placement with this unique haiku!

August 18, 2020 at 12:52 AM

A complete cyvce man's river... whole, not part... salute alkas

August 10, 2020 at 10:39 AM

I like this. Well done :)

August 10, 2020 at 10:28 AM

Very nicely don!

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