wishing I could fly

a black bird rises up like a hot air balloon
following the sun, trying to locate the moon
with absolute envy I followed her rise
wishing that someday I could fly into the skies
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Allison Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 4:43 PM
I think its something many of us dream of being able to do Caren:-) hugs Janxx
Allison Avatar
August 13, 2025 at 1:46 AM
hubby has had 2 weeks of targeted radaition treatment - hopefully it will do the trick!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 12, 2025 at 5:55 PM
hope all is well Jan
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