Wishing

Wishing

Oh, how I wish to touch the moon
Wrap the beams, how I’d croon
Surrounded by sparkles and light
For the moon so enchants the night

Like a swing in the glistening sky
I would sit astride the moon so light
Climb to the heavens on the beams
Look down on earth in a dream

Picture No 1
Penned 30/4/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 1:42 PM
Wonderful and lyrical, Kevin. Congrats on the win.
Fairbrother Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 2:11 AM
Thank-you Andrea. Never expected to even get a mention but hey, there is hope for me yet. Cheers, Kev
Roper Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 1:09 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you , Kevin, for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, rhyme and imagery. Come and visit my Blog.. Hugs Eve
Fairbrother Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 2:14 AM
Thank-you kindly Eve, didn't think I had a dogs hope, must be improving in my old age. Thanks again for the chance to test my mettle, Cheers, kev.
Andresen Avatar
May 5, 2019 at 1:04 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fairbrother Avatar
May 6, 2019 at 2:16 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise but for your input wouldn't have got to first base. Have a lovely day, cheers, Kev.
Andresen Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 2:06 PM
- A lovely poem, Kevin :) - (remember to write the number of the picture you have chosen :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Fairbrother Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 10:15 PM
Thanks Anne-lise. I have now updated poem with picture number. Thanks again, have a good day, cheers, Kev.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 30, 2019 at 9:26 AM
Wonderful!
Fairbrother Avatar
May 1, 2019 at 10:16 PM
Thanks so much Maureen, much obliged. Cheers, Kev.
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