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Wishing Oh, how I wish to touch the moon Wrap the beams, how I’d croon Surrounded by sparkles and light For the moon so enchants the night Like a swing in the glistening sky I would sit astride the moon so light Climb to the heavens on the beams Look down on earth in a dream Picture No 1 Penned 30/4/2019

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Date: 5/5/2019 1:42:00 PM
Wonderful and lyrical, Kevin. Congrats on the win.
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 5/6/2019 2:11:00 AM
Thank-you Andrea. Never expected to even get a mention but hey, there is hope for me yet. Cheers, Kev
Date: 5/5/2019 1:09:00 PM
Congratulations on your win and thank you , Kevin, for entering my contest. Your poem had great flow, rhyme and imagery. Come and visit my Blog.. Hugs Eve
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 5/6/2019 2:14:00 AM
Thank-you kindly Eve, didn't think I had a dogs hope, must be improving in my old age. Thanks again for the chance to test my mettle, Cheers, kev.
Date: 5/5/2019 1:04:00 PM
- Congratulations on your 2nd place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 5/6/2019 2:16:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise but for your input wouldn't have got to first base. Have a lovely day, cheers, Kev.
Date: 4/30/2019 2:06:00 PM
- A lovely poem, Kevin :) - (remember to write the number of the picture you have chosen :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 5/1/2019 10:15:00 PM
Thanks Anne-lise. I have now updated poem with picture number. Thanks again, have a good day, cheers, Kev.
Date: 4/30/2019 9:26:00 AM
Wonderful!
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Kevin Fairbrother
Date: 5/1/2019 10:16:00 PM
Thanks so much Maureen, much obliged. Cheers, Kev.