Wishful Thinking

If one can see beauty everywhere
If one can find light in their despair

If one can find strength when they are weak
If at one's lowest they still find a peak

If one with many losses can still see a gain
If one feels a love through all of their pain

If one can find calm in a life of distress
If one can see splendor in all their mess

If one can find happiness in their grief
If one can fill the void simply with a belief

If one can slow down in a life of rush
If in one’s chaos they can find a hush

If one can find mobility within restrain
If one can find sanity in what is insane

If one can be humble and take a seat
If one can be kind to all that they meet

If one can find life when not wanting to live
If one can be giving with not much to give

If one can still trust after all have lied
If after failing one can say they tried

If one can see hope when all hope is gone
If one can see themselves in their kid’s to live on

If in darkness you see the moon's glow is from the sun......
No wait; is this wishful thinking, or am I the only one?


Inspired by Rudyard Kipling's "IF" poem 


A repost but updated
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Dietrich Avatar
February 8, 2022 at 4:06 PM
what an awesome response to Kipling's poem IF. Wonderful, Brenda
Theraven Avatar
February 3, 2022 at 8:12 AM
Brenda, A world full of Ifs is all we're left with sometimes. Rudyard got it right. So did you. -Richard
Chiri Avatar
February 5, 2022 at 3:38 AM
Thank you Richard!:)
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