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Wishful Flight

While sitting on a bench just outside the door I chanced to see a butterfly fluttering nearby Black bold body with yellow wings spotted winging its way near on a morning clear Wistfully I wished to be that winged creature free to fly around not making a sound It danced around me floating in the air up and down and all around For minutes it stayed near within my grasp then just as quickly flew off swiftly Time seemed frozen for just few seconds as I bid farewell and my heart fell

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/3/2012 5:42:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed my poem, Debra. Great butterfly poem - enjoyed the read. Love & God bless, Maureen
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Date: 5/1/2012 8:29:00 AM
Debra you have painted a moment in time in such a vivid way ,we are there with you. Awesome poem. Anne.
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Date: 4/23/2012 1:21:00 PM
Wishful flight indeed.. Lovely imagery you bring across in this one Debra ;) to be as free as that butterfly hey
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:50:00 PM
The day will come when we all fly. Some say that day is when we die. For others, they already know. How to spread wings, and up they go. Hello Deb, just wanted to say high. :)
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Date: 4/6/2012 9:25:00 PM
They fascinate me too Deb, such delicate little thingsdand so beautiful with all different designs on their wings. Lovely verse that reminds me they soon will be here.
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Date: 4/1/2012 3:11:00 PM
Quietly, we sit and ponder. At beautiful flight that makes us wonder. What is it like to fly so free. I wonder if it wonder's what it's like to be me?
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Date: 3/28/2012 12:45:00 PM
excellent poetry. will miss ya dear poetess, left 1 standing..... :) when one door closes another opens ;)
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Date: 3/27/2012 9:13:00 PM
Debra, wonderful, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV~PD
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Date: 3/27/2012 8:59:00 PM
I really enjoyed reading about this fluttering butterfly, a moment frozen in time for you. Charming poem!
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Date: 3/26/2012 12:41:00 PM
Skillfully written and imaginatively conceived. Very nice. I enjoyed reading your poem.
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Date: 3/26/2012 8:49:00 AM
Lovely!! Can't wait of for these beautiful beings to return. Thanks for the glimpse of summer.
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