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Wishes #2

I wish that we kud keep goin. I wish we kud stop letting thing keep us from fading away. I kno on my part l kan. but kan u let us be n keep things from stoppin us? I still have feelings for u. Its hard for me to try to move on in life because I'm tired of moving on. Now I know the way u feel. I wish everything kud be without hardship. But what I wish the most is to be with u still. My love for u is oh so true.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/27/2009 5:28:00 PM
good job so heartfelt...... n jonay.... if thats u....lol dnt trip on wat ppl say..... they suppose 2 hate anywayz...... thats all ppl do is hate n when ur through they go and still ur happy away couse u was blind.... u better hold on... trust me ive been there n pimped that....
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Date: 5/26/2009 8:24:00 AM
Welcome to the soupland. Post some more. Ernilando
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Date: 5/26/2009 7:40:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Gerald. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/24/2009 8:00:00 PM
im not sure what to say realli loads of ppl dont think im good enuff for u why bother proving them wrong? this is very beautiful though i realli like it keep it up=]]TinkBabyy
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