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"wishes"

If wishes came true You would be thinking of me And not me of you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/17/2010 2:23:00 PM
remember to be careful what you wish for LOL..nice sentence! Light & Love
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:55:00 AM
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Date: 4/3/2010 10:41:00 PM
If only a wiah could come true. I like this one. My fav over all haikus I have read. Glad I bumped into this one. P.D. was here
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Date: 3/6/2010 7:00:00 AM
if only... liked this one
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Date: 2/28/2010 8:57:00 PM
i felt this way once. and it did come true. its okey to, because it turns out just the way you wanted in the end! -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:10:00 PM
Cute poem...enjoyed...Marty
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