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in dreams of summer wishes float soft as petals melting winter snows in dreams of winter springtime wishes to be heard like drifting autumn in dreams of flowers the seed wishes to be free to feel the suns kiss
written 6-2-2020 Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Poetry Contest 2nd Place

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Date: 6/8/2020 12:38:00 PM
Back with BIG congrats, Jeanne, on your podium win.
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Date: 6/7/2020 10:47:00 AM
Very interesting, esp. the 3rd haiku--provocative --congrats on your win!
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Date: 6/7/2020 9:13:00 AM
Oh, so lovely! Congrats!
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Date: 6/6/2020 11:07:00 AM
This is such a musical haiku dear Jeanne. Love the melody your words create. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/6/2020 8:52:00 AM
what charming haiku Jeanne, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2020 1:33:00 PM
:D so wonderful to get a nod for sure!
Date: 6/6/2020 1:02:00 AM
Jeanne, I like your motif of dreaming between the seasons and flowers. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2020 1:31:00 PM
Hi John, and thank you...
Date: 6/4/2020 6:44:00 AM
Lovely haiku, Jeanne--well done.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2020 1:30:00 PM
it's always lovely to have you stop by. Thank you.
Date: 6/3/2020 8:24:00 PM
Love how you incorporated the four seasons, a lovely string Jeanne. Good luck in the contest Tom
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2020 1:22:00 PM
Thanks so much Tom...I think your "wishes" helped :D
Date: 6/3/2020 7:04:00 PM
Beautifully written Haiku, Jeanne...a dreamy vision for every season! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda :)
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 6/7/2020 1:21:00 PM
dreamy vision...humm, could be another haiku coming. Thanks Rhonda

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