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Wishes

in dreams of summer
wishes float soft as petals
melting winter snows

in dreams of winter
springtime wishes to be heard
like drifting autumn

in dreams of flowers
the seed wishes to be free
to feel the suns kiss





written  6-2-2020
Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Poetry Contest
2nd Place

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Vijay Pandit Date: 6/8/2020 12:38:00 PM Back with BIG congrats, Jeanne, on your podium win. Login to Reply

L. J. Carber Date: 6/7/2020 10:47:00 AM Very interesting, esp. the 3rd haiku--provocative --congrats on your win! Login to Reply

JCB Brul Date: 6/7/2020 9:13:00 AM Oh, so lovely! Congrats! Login to Reply

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/6/2020 11:07:00 AM This is such a musical haiku dear Jeanne. Love the melody your words create. Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 6/6/2020 8:52:00 AM what charming haiku Jeanne, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/7/2020 1:33:00 PM :D so wonderful to get a nod for sure!

John Watt Date: 6/6/2020 1:02:00 AM Jeanne, I like your motif of dreaming between the seasons and flowers. Congrats on your win ~ John Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/7/2020 1:31:00 PM Hi John, and thank you...

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/4/2020 6:44:00 AM Lovely haiku, Jeanne--well done. Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/7/2020 1:30:00 PM it's always lovely to have you stop by. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/3/2020 8:24:00 PM Love how you incorporated the four seasons, a lovely string Jeanne. Good luck in the contest Tom Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/7/2020 1:22:00 PM Thanks so much Tom...I think your "wishes" helped :D

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/3/2020 7:04:00 PM Beautifully written Haiku, Jeanne...a dreamy vision for every season! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda :) Login to Reply Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/7/2020 1:21:00 PM dreamy vision...humm, could be another haiku coming. Thanks Rhonda