Jeanne Mcgee Poet Haiku

Wishes

in dreams of summer
wishes float soft as petals
melting winter snows

in dreams of winter
springtime wishes to be heard
like drifting autumn

in dreams of flowers
the seed wishes to be free
to feel the suns kiss





written  6-2-2020
Fresh Traditional HAIKU (5-7-5) Poetry Contest
2nd Place

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Vijay Pandit June 8, 2020 at 12:38 PM Back with BIG congrats, Jeanne, on your podium win.

L. J. Carber June 7, 2020 at 10:47 AM Very interesting, esp. the 3rd haiku--provocative --congrats on your win!

JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 9:13 AM Oh, so lovely! Congrats!

Aditi Mishra June 6, 2020 at 11:07 AM This is such a musical haiku dear Jeanne. Love the melody your words create. Congratulations on your win :)

Jan Allison June 6, 2020 at 8:52 AM what charming haiku Jeanne, many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Jeanne Mcgee June 7, 2020 at 1:33 PM :D so wonderful to get a nod for sure!

John Watt June 6, 2020 at 1:02 AM Jeanne, I like your motif of dreaming between the seasons and flowers. Congrats on your win ~ John Jeanne Mcgee June 7, 2020 at 1:31 PM Hi John, and thank you...

Vijay Pandit June 4, 2020 at 6:44 AM Lovely haiku, Jeanne--well done. Jeanne Mcgee June 7, 2020 at 1:30 PM it's always lovely to have you stop by. Thank you.

Tom Cunningham June 3, 2020 at 8:24 PM Love how you incorporated the four seasons, a lovely string Jeanne. Good luck in the contest Tom Jeanne Mcgee June 7, 2020 at 1:22 PM Thanks so much Tom...I think your "wishes" helped :D

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 3, 2020 at 7:04 PM Beautifully written Haiku, Jeanne...a dreamy vision for every season! Best of luck in the contest. Hugs, Rhonda :) Jeanne Mcgee June 7, 2020 at 1:21 PM dreamy vision...humm, could be another haiku coming. Thanks Rhonda