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Wished Upon a Star

He’s funny, cute, random and smart. He talked to me and stole my heart. He’s adorable, crazy ,and my best friend. He hugged me and said: “I’ll never let go, even after the end.” I’ve laughed, I’ve cried. Yet, he’s always by my side. He took my hand and kissed it. We seen a shooting star and didn’t miss it. We wished and kissed, and he said: “love you.” While knowing our wishes had already come true. He swept me right up off my feet. He leaned in close until our lips did meet. We've both come so far. That night we wished upon a star.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/13/2016 10:39:00 PM
Sadie, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 4/19/2009 5:15:00 AM
Ooh, This is a very sweet and romantic poem. Great use of rhyming couplets. Keep writing. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/18/2009 6:56:00 PM
charming couplet. very nice
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Date: 4/18/2009 12:01:00 PM
Nice work I look forward to seeing more of her work.
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Date: 4/18/2009 3:14:00 AM
such cute and lovely write! ~ Arany
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Date: 4/17/2009 11:30:00 PM
I've wished on many, great work and welcome to the soup.
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Date: 4/17/2009 7:22:00 PM
Nice work Sadie and welcome to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy your stay...Raul
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