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Wish You Were Here

Canopy of trees
trying to cross sky limit....
green revolution

a distant river
lying naked lazily....
an enticing call

the old learned stones
whispering me history ....
wish you were here now



© 2011  kashinath karmakar
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Placement:5th ;(May 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar (6th May 2011)

Contest:Your thoughts

Sponsor:Michael J.Falotico

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Sara Kendrick Date: 6/20/2011 1:18:00 PM Very expressive..Congrats..Sara Login to Reply

Zane Mose Date: 5/25/2011 11:06:00 PM great personification congrats on the contest Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 5/23/2011 7:20:00 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Kashinath. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/22/2011 7:46:00 PM Kash, reading it again, I still love it and I still say, among the very best. YOu outdid yourself with this one. Congratulations. Login to Reply

Matt Hunt Date: 5/22/2011 3:13:00 PM Congrats on your win Kash! Thank you for your kind comments:D Matt Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 5/22/2011 2:25:00 PM A naked river is such an enticing call....especially a lazy naked river.....the whispering stones of history is another creative expression which I like. Great creativity here, Kash. From Gwendolen Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/22/2011 12:17:00 PM I knew this would be a winner, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/22/2011 8:14:00 AM Cngrats Kash on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. enjoy a special win with luv.. happy to be sharing winners list with u ..oh.. Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 5/22/2011 8:05:00 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, kashinath Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 5/22/2011 7:08:00 AM Many congrats on your win, Kash : ) Login to Reply

Chhutan Dey Date: 5/17/2011 5:01:00 PM sensuousness plus imagination make the poem stand..GREAT sir...and thanks for reading my poem. Login to Reply

Black Eyed Susan Date: 5/16/2011 8:10:00 AM this is sad and lovely. I enjoyed reading your work today. Login to Reply

Katherine Stella Date: 5/8/2011 11:41:00 AM what a brilliant write loved the imagery and play on words here this should do very well have not seen this one yet but will also thanks for your help on the syllable count it was 7775 so had to change it a little lol keep up the great work Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 5/7/2011 12:55:00 PM Good luck Kash, in M.j. contest... worth the visit,, to paradise.... thanks for sharing..p..d. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 5/7/2011 10:49:00 AM Awesome take on the picture, Kash. You're in it to win it with this poem! Always sending winning wishes your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn (PS - checked out Leo Larry Amadore and you are RIGHT. He's terrific!) Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 5/7/2011 9:39:00 AM Truly romantic Kash and a great entry for Michael's contest...good luck luv.. the photo does remind one of wishing for another to be there .. sweet one luv.. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/7/2011 1:53:00 AM well, well... this food for thought, kashi.. wow with best wishes! :) huggs, nette Login to Reply

Wilma Neels Date: 5/6/2011 9:51:00 PM Kash you did brilliantly with this challenge!! Absolutely love it.. ;) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/6/2011 8:55:00 PM Kash, this is awesome. One of the best I have read. Way to do the challenge!! Login to Reply

Leo Larry Amadore Date: 5/6/2011 8:27:00 PM A very nice trio of haiku...you might want to correct the syllable count in the second to last line of your series: history has 3 syllables (but could be shown as "hist'ry", perhaps.) Login to Reply

Kash Poet Date: 5/6/2011 7:58:00 PM History lesson learnt. Login to Reply