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Wish You Were Here

Canopy of trees trying to cross sky limit.... green revolution a distant river lying naked lazily.... an enticing call the old learned stones whispering me history .... wish you were here now © 2011 kashinath karmakar ================== Placement:5th ;(May 2011) By:kashinath karmakar (6th May 2011) Contest:Your thoughts Sponsor:Michael J.Falotico

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Date: 6/20/2011 1:18:00 PM
Very expressive..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 5/25/2011 11:06:00 PM
great personification congrats on the contest
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Date: 5/23/2011 7:20:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Kashinath. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:46:00 PM
Kash, reading it again, I still love it and I still say, among the very best. YOu outdid yourself with this one. Congratulations.
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Date: 5/22/2011 3:13:00 PM
Congrats on your win Kash! Thank you for your kind comments:D Matt
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Date: 5/22/2011 2:25:00 PM
A naked river is such an enticing call....especially a lazy naked river.....the whispering stones of history is another creative expression which I like. Great creativity here, Kash. From Gwendolen
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Date: 5/22/2011 12:17:00 PM
I knew this would be a winner, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:14:00 AM
Cngrats Kash on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. enjoy a special win with luv.. happy to be sharing winners list with u ..oh..
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Date: 5/22/2011 8:05:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, kashinath
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Date: 5/22/2011 7:08:00 AM
Many congrats on your win, Kash : )
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Date: 5/17/2011 5:01:00 PM
sensuousness plus imagination make the poem stand..GREAT sir...and thanks for reading my poem.
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Date: 5/16/2011 8:10:00 AM
this is sad and lovely. I enjoyed reading your work today.
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Date: 5/8/2011 11:41:00 AM
what a brilliant write loved the imagery and play on words here this should do very well have not seen this one yet but will also thanks for your help on the syllable count it was 7775 so had to change it a little lol keep up the great work
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Date: 5/7/2011 12:55:00 PM
Good luck Kash, in M.j. contest... worth the visit,, to paradise.... thanks for sharing..p..d.
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Date: 5/7/2011 10:49:00 AM
Awesome take on the picture, Kash. You're in it to win it with this poem! Always sending winning wishes your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn (PS - checked out Leo Larry Amadore and you are RIGHT. He's terrific!)
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Date: 5/7/2011 9:39:00 AM
Truly romantic Kash and a great entry for Michael's contest...good luck luv.. the photo does remind one of wishing for another to be there .. sweet one luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 1:53:00 AM
well, well... this food for thought, kashi.. wow with best wishes! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/6/2011 9:51:00 PM
Kash you did brilliantly with this challenge!! Absolutely love it.. ;)
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:55:00 PM
Kash, this is awesome. One of the best I have read. Way to do the challenge!!
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Date: 5/6/2011 8:27:00 PM
A very nice trio of haiku...you might want to correct the syllable count in the second to last line of your series: history has 3 syllables (but could be shown as "hist'ry", perhaps.)
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Date: 5/6/2011 7:58:00 PM
History lesson learnt.
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