Kash Poet Poet Haiku

Wish You Were Here

Canopy of trees
trying to cross sky limit....
green revolution

a distant river
lying naked lazily....
an enticing call

the old learned stones
whispering me history ....
wish you were here now



© 2011  kashinath karmakar
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Placement:5th ;(May 2011)

By:kashinath karmakar (6th May 2011)

Contest:Your thoughts

Sponsor:Michael J.Falotico

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Sara Kendrick June 20, 2011 at 1:18 PM Very expressive..Congrats..Sara

Zane Mose May 25, 2011 at 11:06 PM great personification congrats on the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown May 23, 2011 at 7:20 AM Congratulations on your win in Michael's Your Thoughts contest Kashinath. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich May 22, 2011 at 7:46 PM Kash, reading it again, I still love it and I still say, among the very best. YOu outdid yourself with this one. Congratulations.

Matt Hunt May 22, 2011 at 3:13 PM Congrats on your win Kash! Thank you for your kind comments:D Matt

Gwendolen Song May 22, 2011 at 2:25 PM A naked river is such an enticing call....especially a lazy naked river.....the whispering stones of history is another creative expression which I like. Great creativity here, Kash. From Gwendolen

Carolyn Devonshire May 22, 2011 at 12:17 PM I knew this would be a winner, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 22, 2011 at 8:14 AM Cngrats Kash on your super win in Michael's contest with this brilliant write my friend.. enjoy a special win with luv.. happy to be sharing winners list with u ..oh..

Dr.Ram Mehta May 22, 2011 at 8:05 AM Congratulations on the win in the contest of michael, kashinath

Jack Horne May 22, 2011 at 7:08 AM Many congrats on your win, Kash : )

Chhutan Dey May 17, 2011 at 5:01 PM sensuousness plus imagination make the poem stand..GREAT sir...and thanks for reading my poem.

Black Eyed Susan May 16, 2011 at 8:10 AM this is sad and lovely. I enjoyed reading your work today.

Katherine Stella May 8, 2011 at 11:41 AM what a brilliant write loved the imagery and play on words here this should do very well have not seen this one yet but will also thanks for your help on the syllable count it was 7775 so had to change it a little lol keep up the great work

Poet Destroyer A May 7, 2011 at 12:55 PM Good luck Kash, in M.j. contest... worth the visit,, to paradise.... thanks for sharing..p..d.

Carolyn Devonshire May 7, 2011 at 10:49 AM Awesome take on the picture, Kash. You're in it to win it with this poem! Always sending winning wishes your way, my friend. Love, Carolyn (PS - checked out Leo Larry Amadore and you are RIGHT. He's terrific!)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 7, 2011 at 9:39 AM Truly romantic Kash and a great entry for Michael's contest...good luck luv.. the photo does remind one of wishing for another to be there .. sweet one luv..

Nette Onclaud May 7, 2011 at 1:53 AM well, well... this food for thought, kashi.. wow with best wishes! :) huggs, nette

Wilma Neels May 6, 2011 at 9:51 PM Kash you did brilliantly with this challenge!! Absolutely love it.. ;)

Andrea Dietrich May 6, 2011 at 8:55 PM Kash, this is awesome. One of the best I have read. Way to do the challenge!!

Leo Larry Amadore May 6, 2011 at 8:27 PM A very nice trio of haiku...you might want to correct the syllable count in the second to last line of your series: history has 3 syllables (but could be shown as "hist'ry", perhaps.)

Kash Poet May 6, 2011 at 7:58 PM History lesson learnt.