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Wish Upon the Moon

I no longer wish upon a Star I now wish upon the moon My wishes weren't getting far But now they seem to bloom The stars may hold enchantment The moon has an undeniable pull Yet holds no kind of resentment The stars promises are so cruel So each night when I wish above I wish to the moons bright light Whenever I ask for a true love He comes home to me each night Contest:give me your best new poem Sponsor:Emile Pinet Date:10/1/2019

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Elaine Perrin

Date: 10/6/2019 2:49:00 PM

Such a talented lady. Another beauty :-) x

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/6/2019 3:15:00 PM

I so appreciate your comments !;)

P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/2/2019 1:51:00 PM

Brenda you have been killing it! Especially love the closing lines.

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 3:24:00 PM

Thank you so much PS! Much appreciated! And yes my muse has been working a bit overtime of late on love and such! Must be my inspiration!;) he is really quite talented!;)

Chris Green

Date: 10/2/2019 7:08:00 AM

You know how I love the moon, well I love this poem just as much. A glowing testament to your talent my friend. Best wishes in the contest

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/2/2019 8:25:00 AM

Thanks so much chris! And yes I know you do! Lol I have been writing quite a few and got tagged Moon goddess (haha right) on the other sight!;) me and a friend anyway!;)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/1/2019 9:37:00 PM

This is extra-lovely! Disney will have to rewrite Pinocchio: 'When you wish upon the Moon,...' Cheers, Gershon

Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/1/2019 9:47:00 PM

Gershon thank you my friend! Lol! Wishing on stars were getting redundant!;)