Brenda Chiri Poet Rhyme

Wish Upon the Moon

I no longer wish upon a Star
I now wish upon the moon
My wishes weren't getting far
But now they seem to bloom

The stars may hold enchantment
The moon has an undeniable pull
Yet holds no kind of resentment
The stars promises are so cruel

So each night when I wish above
I wish to the moons bright light
Whenever I ask for a true love
He comes home to me each night

Contest:give me your best new poem
Sponsor:Emile Pinet
Date:10/1/2019

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Elaine Perrin October 6, 2019 at 2:49 PM Such a talented lady. Another beauty :-) x Brenda Chiri October 6, 2019 at 3:15 PM I so appreciate your comments !;)

P.S. Awtry October 2, 2019 at 1:51 PM Brenda you have been killing it! Especially love the closing lines. Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 3:24 PM Thank you so much PS! Much appreciated! And yes my muse has been working a bit overtime of late on love and such! Must be my inspiration!;) he is really quite talented!;)

Chris Green October 2, 2019 at 7:08 AM You know how I love the moon, well I love this poem just as much. A glowing testament to your talent my friend. Best wishes in the contest Brenda Chiri October 2, 2019 at 8:25 AM Thanks so much chris! And yes I know you do! Lol I have been writing quite a few and got tagged Moon goddess (haha right) on the other sight!;) me and a friend anyway!;)

Gershon Wolf October 1, 2019 at 9:37 PM This is extra-lovely! Disney will have to rewrite Pinocchio: 'When you wish upon the Moon,...' Cheers, Gershon Brenda Chiri October 1, 2019 at 9:47 PM Gershon thank you my friend! Lol! Wishing on stars were getting redundant!;)