Notes About The Poem

Wish there was a better answer

X-rays and ultrasounds won't help
your broken heart's in need of mending
~ time being the wonder ointment



Wordku: 5-7-5 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 5:02 PM
I felt twinges of sadness with the reality you touched upon in your poem. Well done. Faving.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 11:50 AM
Hello Lin, yes the ointment will help. Happy Thanksgiving Day. /Hugs. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 27, 2025 at 4:48 AM
Hello Lin, Thank you. Are you having compay over for Thanksgiving Day? Hugs. Darlene/
Gauthier Avatar
September 26, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Thanks and Happy Thanksgiving to you too, Darlene ~
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