Wish On a Grey Day

Italians have called me paisan 
Blacks have called me brother
I broke up with my woman 
And now I need another

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 1/28/2016 9:58:00 AM
The bliss from this page cannot be exhausted. This is incredible and wonderful. Great lines and an awesome 7
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Date: 1/5/2016 12:59:00 PM
Haha! I love it Matthew!! Super rhythm and rhyme. Well done! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 12/30/2015 4:23:00 PM
That's a good rhyme... I wonder if it's true... Hugs LINDA
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:42:00 PM
Have never heard the term paisan - have learned a new word:-) thanks Matthew enjoyed your poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2015 5:16:00 PM
'In peace' my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Matthew Anish
Date: 12/27/2015 5:14:00 PM
It is an Italian word. I am not sure of the exact meaning - but it might mean friend or brother. The mayor of my city is Bill Deblasio - he is an Italian man - married to an African American. I voted for him - he won in a landslide. The homeless problem is terrible in NYC. B'Shalom - I am sure you know what Shalom means
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