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Wish I Was In a Better Place

  Wish i was in a better place.
To survive myself from this case.
I know it is just a phase,
till I get God's grace.

I think I'm sounding ungrateful.
It's just that sometimes it gets painful.
I should thank God and stay faithful,
'cause graceful days are coming peaceful.

appreciationbibleblessingfaithfeelingsrhyme

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Kamran Rashid

March 27, 2015 at 4:24 PM

its same everywhere,,whether we here or u there no one ever says.alhamdulillah well ua words mean alot..and i can undastnd and got a lesson tnkyou ,,keep going and hope to read better and best of you

Yoni Abai

March 30, 2015 at 5:58 AM

Thank you , I appreciate it !

Lindsey Young

February 2, 2015 at 11:31 AM

Beautiful, Yoni. I just love this poem.

Yoni Abai

March 30, 2015 at 5:57 AM

Thank you :)

Funom Makama

January 28, 2015 at 8:03 AM

oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages

Yoni Abai

February 2, 2015 at 7:12 AM

I'm glad you liked it.. New year is going good thank God, hope yours is well too :) Thank you so much!

Poet Destroyer A

January 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM

you are welcome ((regarding the bottom reply))

Poet Destroyer A

January 10, 2015 at 10:16 PM

Yoni, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Yoni Abai

January 11, 2015 at 2:06 PM

Thank you, I really appreciate it !

Hamida Yamin

January 7, 2015 at 8:11 PM

Hi Yoni, I am charmed by your poem. Happy New Year.

Yoni Abai

January 8, 2015 at 10:48 AM

I'm glad for making you feel that way :) Happy New Year xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 5, 2015 at 5:30 AM

- A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Yoni - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Yoni Abai

January 5, 2015 at 8:17 AM

Thanx so much Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

January 2, 2015 at 10:51 PM

This is very nice Yoni, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Yoni Abai

January 3, 2015 at 4:10 PM

Thanx so much ! I would gladly accept your invitation and definitely have a look on your contest. Thank you for this beautiful welcome !

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