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Wish I Was In a Better Place

  Wish i was in a better place.
To survive myself from this case.
I know it is just a phase,
till I get God's grace.

I think I'm sounding ungrateful.
It's just that sometimes it gets painful.
I should thank God and stay faithful,
'cause graceful days are coming peaceful.

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Kamran Rashid Date: 3/27/2015 4:24:00 PM its same everywhere,,whether we here or u there no one ever says.alhamdulillah well ua words mean alot..and i can undastnd and got a lesson tnkyou ,,keep going and hope to read better and best of you Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 3/30/2015 5:58:00 AM Thank you , I appreciate it !

Lindsey Young Date: 2/2/2015 11:31:00 AM Beautiful, Yoni. I just love this poem. Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 3/30/2015 5:57:00 AM Thank you :)

Funom Makama Date: 1/28/2015 8:03:00 AM oh! What agreat, great and lovely poem. I hope the new year if going on well,. Hoping to visit more of your pages Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 2/2/2015 7:12:00 AM I'm glad you liked it.. New year is going good thank God, hope yours is well too :) Thank you so much!

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/16/2015 12:00:00 AM you are welcome ((regarding the bottom reply)) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/10/2015 10:16:00 PM Yoni, Congratulations on having your poem featured on Poetry Soup's Home Page. Always & Forever ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 1/11/2015 2:06:00 PM Thank you, I really appreciate it !

Hamida Yamin Date: 1/7/2015 8:11:00 PM Hi Yoni, I am charmed by your poem. Happy New Year. Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 1/8/2015 10:48:00 AM I'm glad for making you feel that way :) Happy New Year xx

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 1/5/2015 5:30:00 AM - A warm welcome to the P - Soup and into the new year 2015 - I look forward to reading more of your poems this year - I hope you will enjoy reading and writing with us, Yoni - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 1/5/2015 8:17:00 AM Thanx so much Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/2/2015 10:51:00 PM This is very nice Yoni, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to start the New Year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@ Login to Reply Yoni Abai Date: 1/3/2015 4:10:00 PM Thanx so much ! I would gladly accept your invitation and definitely have a look on your contest. Thank you for this beautiful welcome !